Thursday, 20 May 2010

Half a league, half a league...

Not doing tonight's wordcount yet as I hope to get more in.

But, I am oddly pleased with this sentence, even though I can't quite decide where the comma should go and keep moving it about.

Abstract castings flowed around the shaking machine, mimicking currents within air and holding a murder of metal crows frozen in flight upon them.

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