Dialogue.
'I don't know why I
can't live with your brother. Your brother would treat me much better
than you do.'
'He's in America, Mum.'
'Doing a proper job,
earning money, not like you.'
'I'm looking after you,
Jack and the kids, Mum.'
'You're not doing a
very good job.'
'Here, Mum, take your
pills.'
'I've already taken
them.'
'No Mum, that was this
morning's lot.'
'Oh, alright then. Why
doesn't Alice come visit any more?'
'Alice died, Mum, a
year ago.'
'I liked talking to
Alice, I don't like talking to you.'
'What would you like
for tea, Mum?'
'Are you cooking it?'
'Yes, Mum.'
'Oh dear.'
'Here, Mum, take your
pills.'
'I've already taken
them.'
'No Mum, Your memory's
going, that was this morning's lot.'
'Oh alright then.'
'I'll just do you the
same as the kids then, for tea?'
'Not mash, your mash is
lumpy, makes me want to be sick. I don't know why Jack married you.'
'We're very happy.'
'He deserves better,
look at you.'
I've got a lot on,
Mum.'
I'm tired, Janice.'
'So am I, Mum.'
'I think, I think, I'll
close my eyes for a bit. I. I can't think straight.'
'Neither can I, Mum.
But Before you go to sleep, you need to take your pills.'
'I thought, I thought
I'd already taken them.'
'No Mum, that was this
morning's lot. But don't worry, these are the last ones. I love you,
Mum.'
'Go away.'
'I love you, Mum.'
(Obviously, there are pacing issues here and it could probably do with a bit of slowing down but I think the idea comes across. If you have any thoughts I would love to hear them.)
(Obviously, there are pacing issues here and it could probably do with a bit of slowing down but I think the idea comes across. If you have any thoughts I would love to hear them.)
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